So far, Ciso loves it, Adam hates it, and I'm still on the fence.
I guess I just had to accept the challenge to come up with something "better." I don't know if it is better; it certainly is different, and fits the tone of the song well, I suppose.
"if you were walking, I'd be your footsteps
if you were dying, I'd be your last breath
if you would love me even though I'm not perfect
the world would seem new again"
Meh. I think the last line is a little weak.
Whatever.
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Well, I wouldn't say that I love it, but I will say that I regret what I posted about it earlier.
I do like it though.
Thanks for accepting the challenge, but can you forget what I originally said about this verse and return it to its original form?
I'm sorry I'm such a jackass.
I get caught up in trying to give you an in-depth critique and I just start to fall in love with the sound of my own voice, or rather the sound of my fingers typing.
I fell in love with the song as is, and now I feel like I'm trying to change it, or that you feel that I think it could be better.
I'm a jackass.
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